Laura: "The Title of the magazine is effective as it really stands out. Maybe next time you could use a picture that is in colour so it looks more busy."
Kemi: " I like the way how you have used a black and white photo and then bright yellow and white writing, this really stands out. I also like how you have put the bar code, web address and price on it as this is what all/most magazine front covers have."
I asked these people for their feedback as they are my target audience being 16 -21 year olds.

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